Wednesday 22 November 2017

Adventure story

2 comments:

  1. Bola Max,
    That was a great story it was short but very interesting. (very different from my story) It remaindered me about how many times I've been on my motorbike with my family. Was based on a true story? I could use a bit more description, but other than that it's awesome. Ka pai.
    Poppy

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  2. Kia Ora Max
    My name Major I really liked your adventure story I saw a lot of detail that you put in the the story. That would of been fun riding your motorbikes on the road.

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