Hi Max, Your circle D.L.O is very cool. But it wasn't in your own words. You just used the pictures from our walls.(The class room) It would be okay if you put some of your own words in to explain the pictures. You could also explain the features of the circles a bit more. Over all it was good. Nice work Max. Poppy
Hi Max,
ReplyDeleteYour circle D.L.O is very cool. But it wasn't in your own words. You just used the pictures from our walls.(The class room) It would be okay if you put some of your own words in to explain the pictures. You could also explain the features of the circles a bit more. Over all it was good. Nice work Max.
Poppy