Wednesday 25 July 2018

Refugee Poem

In this task me and a couple of friends “tried” to make a poem like
Brian Bilston. When you read it down is is against refugees and when
you read it up you are for refugees.


This poem is not made to offend anybody in anyway.


Refugees


They do not need our help
Do not tell us
These fake stories
These hungry faces
Cold blooded bombers
From both sides
Waiting for the right moment
To seek rights
To risk freedoms
Locals are causing havoc
With there dirty little lies
They are Escaping from disaster
No power no water
Don't give them anything
You say.


(Now read from bottom to top)


The Refugee poem was created by Max, Grace and
Sam this poem was made to make people think that he
is against Refugees but if you read the last line it states
(Now read from bottom to top) than it read like he is for
Refugees.

2 comments:

  1. Greetings Max, This is a really interesting poem. I like the idea of reading bottom to top or top from bottom. But I also like the poem itself . I find writing poems difficult at times. I think that you are amazing at writing poems. Just check your blurb before you post but otherwise keep up the great work!

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  2. Hi Max,

    What a fantastic job you have done here. I like the way that you wrote a short summary at the end of who the story was made by. I think you did a great job. Next time you can probably extend your blurb so we know what else you did to complete this task.

    Keep up the good work.

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.